| Name: | Wandy |
| Email: | |
| HomePage: | http://liveabeautifulife.blogspot.com/ |
| Where are you from: | Singapore |
| Comments: | testing... |
| October 14, 2009 06:30:29 (GMT Time) |
| Name: | Wandy |
| Email: | |
| HomePage: | http://liveabeautifulife.blogspot.com/ |
| Where are you from: | Singapore |
| Comments: | nice site there, but the "Favorite Links" section looks a bit messy. Would be nice if you rearrange them to be more organized. Also, the purpose of the website creation is not so clear to me.. hmmm... |
| October 14, 2009 06:26:20 (GMT Time) |
| Name: | Margaret Gust |
| Email: | gust.margaret{at}yahoo.com |
| HomePage: | http://www.wineshopathome.com/margaretgust |
| Where are you from: | Florida |
| Comments: | Hi, John! Your improvements are really great. I still think you should move your graphic up to the top of your page, but has to be your choice. I would back your statement about your 25 years of experience! Something like, "Put my 25+ years experience to work for you." Also, you might want to add a little detail on the "hardware installs" and "software installs." Many people don't understand the difference betweeen those terms - so, put "Hardware installs - double your RAM, etc." "software - tune up your virus protection, browser and email security," whatever you think will help the barely computer literate who need your services understand what you have to offer them. |
| October 9, 2009 02:58:20 (GMT Time) |
| Name: | Margaret Gust |
| Email: | gust.margaret{at}yahoo.com |
| Where are you from: | Florida |
| Comments: | Hello! Love your seasonal graphics, very pleasant visuals. I think you need to work on your text, especially the "Welcome to my homepage!" You need an attention grabber. Let people know as soon as they open your website what your business is and what you can do for them. For example, "Welcome to Charlie's Computer _______ Repair!" Do you repair hardware or software? Make that clear (fill it in the blank line here in my example). The all caps is very difficult to read. Use bold if you want it to stand out, and for the second paragraph, you might use a different font, to set it apart from the first. I would break up the text and do each sentence as a separate paragraph - it makes it easier to read. Move your cartoon with the caption to the top of your page. Finally, make sure you spellcheck - you have a misspelled word in your text. Best of luck with your venture. |
| October 4, 2009 03:15:44 (GMT Time) |
| Name: | Don |
| Email: | donny1437{at}gmail.com |
| Where are you from: | United Kingdom |
| Comments: | Hi John, I think you may benefit from a few more graphics to illustrate what you do, I personally think it may help. Hope you are successfull All the best, Don |
| October 3, 2009 14:17:21 (GMT Time) |
| Name: | john peck |
| Email: | ccrebel02{at}aol.com |
| Where are you from: | iowa |
| Comments: | this is a test to see if everything is working |
| September 30, 2009 19:59:48 (GMT Time) |